I blame the delay for this chapter on the holidays. It took myself and my beta readers forever to get around to this, mostly my second grammar checker (you know who you are), who just now finished it and sent it to me. Meanwhile she has chapter 4 on her plate and chapter 5 is in the hands of my first grammar checker.
This chapter had a revision right after I finished chapter 5- as it turns out all of my friends can tell me at length the difference between a kitsune and a tanuki but not a single one of them knows what a medicine bag is. So I had to add a paragraph to explain and foreshadow. And I did not want to foreshadow the bag. *sigh* Oh well.
My favorite part about this chapter? The next chapter- because it focuses on a new character! You don't get to find out what happens to Seraph until chapter 5! HAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHA!
I've always wanted to do that.
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