And here we see how Gabriel ended up in his chair. There is more to this back-story, but I won't spoil that here. What I would like to point out is fight in the motel room in Chapter 2 might have a little more meaning now- as this incident is referenced in it.
See? I planned ahead for this!
As for the vision, the purple-green stone is alexandrite. Although the internet has been really stupid about being able to tell me how large the biggest alexandrite is, I am pretty sure the don't get as big as the one in my story. Particularly ones cut into shapes. Anywho, a stone that size would be worth more than just about any other shiny rock on the planet, and its magic!
Edit: I didn't have a name for the doctor while I was writing this, because he wasn't that important, so I just wrote 'Dr. Something'. I told a friend about this and she suggested that I call him 'Dr. Sumtin'. XD
Clearly I went with it, and since none of my beta readers caught it I call it win.
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