Been awhile huh? Let me go back and re-read this, I don't remember what happens.
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Oh, right! Well, I have two big bits of info here. The first is I finally kicked Seraph out of the closet. The second I kicked the gods out of a different closest- revealing them as real, active players... in whatever it is that they are doing.
The scene had originally set out to just out Seraph. I haven't been able to establish her as gay so far, but I didn't want to spring that on the readers in the second book when Seraph gets with her love interest. I would have liked to bring it up earlier, but I would have had to shoehorn it in there. So I decided to shoehorn it in here!
Of course I had a hard time making it fit, but really this was the only place for it. After this is the climax and the aftermath, so there's no time for her to chill and talk. I don't remember when I decided to make Brad gay too, but his coming out segue for Seraph bring it up as well.
The god thing was a last minute addition, but I like out it turned out. It covers Seraph's coming out with an exposition dump that really will be important later ( OR WILL IT?) and it does a little bit of world building, just to remind you that this... isn't the world you know. =0
(I know that's a quote, but I don't remember from what =P)
Going to also post some bonus content for this chapter! =D
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