I firmly believe that the drunk call should be used more often as a plot device.
Nobody can argue with you like family, huh? I think that I might hate my characters, while I was writing this, I thought, 'Wow, that sounds dickish, they should say that!' as I gleefully typed.
Also, right around book two, this chapter will have new meaning... but you will just have to wait until book two to learn what that is! =P
The first couple versions of this chapter didn't include a physical description of Seraph. I don't like stopping the narration to talk about what the characters look like for no reason, it wasn't until I realized that I had a perfect opportunity to have her look in a mirror did I feel I could add what she looked like.
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