Okay, it was 4am and I woke up with this story dancing in my head, so I crawled out of bed and wrote it in notepad and went right back to bed. When I woke up the next morning, I had forgotten about it until I went back on my computer after work.
I kept the lack of punctuation and capitalization because I liked how it made the piece feel.
An interesting side note about this story; the people I showed it to had one of two reactions, they either thought it was a pretty woman style story in which the woman is saved, or they thought the main character was going to get murdered in some horrible fashion. The older and more social of my friends with real world experience thought death and the shut in who played magic during lunch thought pretty woman.
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